Farewell Trance Comments

Quite fine indeed. Your poem has life in and of it.

its nice to read though sorrowful the verses are

gud one check my latest

The sigh of first love and d maturing acceptance..good flow of words

In deep silence Lonely existance. Thinking of you I sing the farewell trance....nice writing young poet...keep it up

We have to keep friendships alive, keep in touch with them.

enchanting muzic a music lover you are am i write

U do very well keep it up

accha poem hai gud write