I gave up all i had
just for me to be heard
but lacked the boldness
to fix the bait to the hook
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wow the last stanza really struck me this poem definitely deserves a 10 and don't give up on love! there is someone out there for you
a beautiful write that tells the tale of vagaries young hearts have to face in love life...frank and expressive lines well meant nicely framed...10