Farewell To Elizabeth Comments

Fred's absolutely right Missy, don't 'throw' words on the page, think about them, seriously. Best, Jerry

I can see that your thoughts are deeply felt, but you need to learn more about writing poetry.

I'm confused by the first line. I tried reading it a couple times, but it doesn't sound right. And when the first line isn't working, the reader is a lot less likely to keep on reading.

the 'I Love You' ending makes this poem memorable and unique.. a little bit 'love letter' version.. the best part for me is the title.. very high class this poem is like a combination between ' An Angel' and 'Before You Leave' good job, as usual