Sunday, November 6, 2005

Farewell To Autumn Comments

Rating: 3.8

I watched the sun dance through the trees
Leaping and dancing
In the dying days of Autumn;
Dodging the cold and damp of winter...
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Lucy Burrow
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Rajaram Ramachandran 30 November 2005

Every line speaks about Lucy's poetical sense to admire the nature. For example, 'I saw the jewels of morning dew, Entwined in threads of silver...'-what a wonderful choice of words, the morning dews in a silvery background! Lucy's imagination is very much high indeed!

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Sandra Fowler 11 November 2005

Dear Lucy, This is a fine poem, The imagery is good, the content thoughtful and the mood is rich and genuine. Keep up the good work! Sandra Fowler

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Ernestine Northover 07 November 2005

That Lucy is a winner! ! ! ! ! ! ! Sincerely Ernestine

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Charles Chaim Wax 06 November 2005

the love of Nature always stirs me our home and refuge these words are vivid creating images real and true a fine poem

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Lucy Burrow

Lucy Burrow

Nigeria, West Africa
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