Saturday, March 7, 2015

Farewell To Arms Comments

Rating: 5.0

The hunter is lost in a wild forest,
It’s a moonless night,
Trees are dense; He can’t see the stars,
Beats of his heart by second and second,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Jeri Martindale 17 March 2015

Great work on taking us outside into the woods as a hunter who is being hunted all the while being safe and sound in his own home!

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Hazel Durham 09 March 2015

So original with amazing imagery that captures the scene so vividly as he surrenders to nature's unknown outcome which turns into the reality of a shining road! Brilliant write!

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Hans Vr 08 March 2015

A fantastic poem with a great story. A story of surrendering to the good of mother nature. Inspiring and lovely. A great 10.

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Khalida Bano Ali 07 March 2015

A great poem with a great message......................10

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