Friday, August 10, 2012

Farewell My Beloved Comments

Rating: 4.5

Don't cry for me my beloved
My time has come, the timer is still
I've sniffed a rose and loved the smell
I've heard the birds sing their lovely tunes and sang along
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Thobile Masondo
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Chinedu Dike 05 November 2014

A nice narrative poem about a courageous heart on the verge of passing on and wholeheartedly accepting the inevitable - death. A well articulated piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Deepak Manchanda 10 August 2012

My time has come...my timer is still; Very lovely words. I liked this poem.

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Thobile Masondo

Thobile Masondo

Durban, KwaZulu Natal, South Africa
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