Wednesday, August 12, 2020

Farewell / अलविदा (Hindi) Comments

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Farewell by Rabindranath Tagore
अलविदा: मूल रचना गुरुदेव रवीन्द्रनाथ टैगोर
हिंदी भावानुवाद रजनीश मंगा द्वारा
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 20 August 2020

ये मेरे दरवाजे की चाबी कृपया वापिस लीजिये कोई भी दावा मेरा अब इस घर पे बाकी है नहीं जाने से पहले मैं आपका आशीर्वचन पा कर चलूँगा Wonderful poem so beautifully translated, Rajnish ji......10

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Kezia Kezia 18 August 2020

bahut sundar shriman. dhanyawad...

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 August 2020

You have translated Tagore's poem in heart touching manner. Telling goodbye to others we express our emotion. Long time's neighbor remains in memory and we feel the emotion of such moment.We feel the life's journey with goodbye. An excellent poem is well penned....10

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Sylvia Frances Chan 15 August 2020

This is a Masterpiece by the great Mr. Rabindranath Tagore Sir. I am so thankful to you Rajnish Sir, because you translated this Masterpiece, I can read that. Such a Beauty! Thank you so much, Rajnish Sir! A 10+++

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Sankhajit Bhattacharjee 14 August 2020

great composition.......a poem of times indeed........10+

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 14 August 2020

We were neighbors for long, but I received more than I could give. Now the day has dawned and the lamp that lit my dark corner is out. A summons has come and I am ready for my journey. ANTICIPATORY POETRY HE GOT A NOBEL SO TILL TODAY WE ALL RING HIS DOOR BELL TAKE HIM WELL SLEEP WELL TIME ONLY TO SOME ONE DOES TELL The flickering candle is the light of knell RM JI STAY WELL

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Sharad Bhatia 13 August 2020

गुरु जी सादर प्रणाम, एक बार फिर एक प्यारी सी कविता का बहुत प्यारा सा अनुवाद. दिल खुश हो गया पढ़कर. ईश्वर से प्रार्थना यही हैं कि आप इसी तरह हर प्यारी कविता का प्यारा सा अनुवाद करे, जिसे हम सब एक मंच के साथी पढ़कर लुफ्त उठाए।। बहुत - बहुत आभार आपका छोटा सा शिष्य (शरद भाटिया)

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me poet yeps poet 13 August 2020

RM Sirrrr YOU TOO IGNORING MY POEMS, WHAT WRONG I DID BY CALLING A SPADE A SPADE. you Translating POEMS of OTHERS NAD Your Rating IN TOP# 500 POETS IN 400 YEARS I CANOUT reach. YOU DeserTed MY POEMS. I PROMOTED YOU ON PH SITE RM SIRRRR PH is not BOther about COMMENTS only COMING IN MAILS. I LOGIN iT ask me to write name posting message DO something. TUTI FUTI HINDI ME KHUS HUA ME POET....

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M Asim Nehal 13 August 2020

रविंद्रनाथ टैगोर जी मेरे सबसे पसन्दीदा कवि और दार्शनिक है, उनकी सभी रचनाएँ मन को छु जाती है, आपका अनुवाद मन को उत्तेजित कर गया यह सोच कर की जाते हुए भी उनके मन में ये बोझ रहा की उन्होंने अपने पड़ोसियों के लिए कुछ नहीं किया या जो किया उससे वह खुद संतुष्ट नहीं हुए , आज के ज़माने में ऐसा कौन सोचता है? पढ़कर मज़ा आया, धन्यवाद 10+

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Aarzoo Mehek 13 August 2020

Farewells are painful but life is a journey and cherishing all the good times and moving on is what life is all about. A humble tribute to the good old times. Beautifully translated by you makes the poem more beautiful. My compliments Rajnish jii 10++

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 13 August 2020

Rabridthnath Tagore is one of my fav Classic poets and you did him justice with a great fab translation of his poem. Seems to be about a neighbor embarking on passing away journey wow! Kudos!

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me poet yeps poet 12 August 2020

RM Sirrrrr YOU Forgot MEEEE, My Favours That I PROMOTED YOU ON PH BY requesting TO Translate Mom's Smiles YOU DID GooD AND BECOME FAMOUS NOW NOT COMMENTING ON MY POEMS WHYYY? ? IwilldeleteeeIf yoy want. Site not posting Comments. All Giving TROUBLE TO MEE POET

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