Didn't cry for you
But heart was broken
Held back swollen tears
Manly stupidity
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So true about grief for some they show it in different ways. Lovely poem about your Mom.
This poem, expresses fully your feelings of love, pain and lose for this person, you so dearly love. It totally communicates. We feel your hurt, desperation and fear, not having her near. A painful but loving cry, beautifully written and so full of sentiment it really makes the reader inwardly cry.
Sandra, thank you so much for your very much for your heart-felt reply.
Didn't cry for you/But heart was broken......magnifent opening lines! A wonderful composition!
Dillip, it means so very much to me that you have so positively responded to this poem that is so dear to mine heart. And that you've added it to your favourites. My Godmother was indeed my second mom!