Sunday, February 4, 2018

Farewell Godmom Comments

Rating: 4.5

Didn't cry for you
But heart was broken
Held back swollen tears
Manly stupidity
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Richard Wlodarski
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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 November 2022

Didn't cry for you/But heart was broken......magnifent opening lines! A wonderful composition!

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Richard Wlodarski 19 November 2022

Dillip, it means so very much to me that you have so positively responded to this poem that is so dear to mine heart. And that you've added it to your favourites. My Godmother was indeed my second mom!

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Ellen Ni Bheachain 21 June 2020

So true about grief for some they show it in different ways. Lovely poem about your Mom.

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Sandra Feldman 09 March 2018

This poem, expresses fully your feelings of love, pain and lose for this person, you so dearly love. It totally communicates. We feel your hurt, desperation and fear, not having her near. A painful but loving cry, beautifully written and so full of sentiment it really makes the reader inwardly cry.

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Richard Wlodarski 20 March 2018

Sandra, thank you so much for your very much for your heart-felt reply.

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