Farewell Beloved... Farewell Comments

very nice & soft composition dear..i found a new begining in the last line.a promise, a sweet waiting to meet the beloved.Thanx for sharing such a lovely poem.God Bless u

very nice composition lovely to read....a significant verses...10

oowwww...whatta a promise...tho goodbye means tears, but...we have no choice..if there is a beginning, there's an end too..just smileeeeeeeeeeeeee.... naizz

Such a loving composition woven with poignancy here, touching the soul of your readers.....Goodbye is one of the most hurting pace of one's life, most hurting word that we dont want to hear or say.........Nice to read you again! ! ! your friend here in Makati.....: 0)