Farewell Comments

I think poem is about changing a place of job............................a good write.......

Kranthi the subject is death and you are saying goodbye. This reads more like a suicide note than anything else. I do hope you're not having the feelings of this poem. We need you to keep posting more great work.

'Time came to the end My day came to dawn Lamp lit my darkness is out Final summon has come I am ready for my journey' Soft and touching poem...

hmmm interesting well we hope you keep on writing please don't farwell 2 us good write 10

death was there at the door, and you said your farewells to everything that you knew, including the ones who were close to you. a very good write. a ten

''Time came to leave The ones I played with The tools I worked on To voice of my rouse And my keys of house'' a wonderful extended metaphor of a wonderful abstract poem of time, ...10+++

Free farewell...last kind words...such a poignant yet with a sort of relief in your words........lovely poem in eloquence........10

Even the birds go out on the limb and spread wings and fly.

hi poet, you penned a wonderfull poem, pathetic in feel.the para under is 'Time came to the end My day came to dawn Lamp lit my darkness is out Final summon has come I am ready for my journey' is realy pathetic as one is leaving.touching poem. posted10 surya

let the farewell be memorable...... the past always sweet the future is sour but present is always amruth........ your poem is nice....

let the farewell be memorable...... the past always sweet the future is sour but present is always amruth........ your poem is nice....

While I was reading this poem I remember my childhood. Yes, we have to leave the place were we grown up The place were we left the beautiful memories of our childhood. The friends and neighbors who were so kind to us, But leaving is not and end of everything It will always remain in our hearts those wonderful past we had.. The message was nice keep it up Kranthi..you have`a very nice poem..

Quite a good poem written in such a simple language with a good meaning. Yes, Kranthi, a time comes to bid farewell to our loved ones when a job comes, when it becomes necessary to shift to other place and when it becomes inevitable to leave this world for our heavenly abode. Congrats.