Tuesday, June 23, 2009

Farewell Comments

Rating: 5.0

Time came to take leave
From my brothers and sisters
From my home of years
From those streets I walked
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Kranthi Pothineni
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Dr Hitesh Sheth 06 July 2009

I think poem is about changing a place of job............................a good write.......

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Lee Crowell 24 June 2009

Kranthi the subject is death and you are saying goodbye. This reads more like a suicide note than anything else. I do hope you're not having the feelings of this poem. We need you to keep posting more great work.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 24 June 2009

'Time came to the end My day came to dawn Lamp lit my darkness is out Final summon has come I am ready for my journey' Soft and touching poem...

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Eyan Desir 23 June 2009

hmmm interesting well we hope you keep on writing please don't farwell 2 us good write 10

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Louis Rams 23 June 2009

death was there at the door, and you said your farewells to everything that you knew, including the ones who were close to you. a very good write. a ten

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Marieta Maglas 23 June 2009

''Time came to leave The ones I played with The tools I worked on To voice of my rouse And my keys of house'' a wonderful extended metaphor of a wonderful abstract poem of time, ...10+++

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Catrina Heart 23 June 2009

Free farewell...last kind words...such a poignant yet with a sort of relief in your words........lovely poem in eloquence........10

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Joseph Poewhit 23 June 2009

Even the birds go out on the limb and spread wings and fly.

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Surya . 23 June 2009

hi poet, you penned a wonderfull poem, pathetic in feel.the para under is 'Time came to the end My day came to dawn Lamp lit my darkness is out Final summon has come I am ready for my journey' is realy pathetic as one is leaving.touching poem. posted10 surya

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rago rago 23 June 2009

let the farewell be memorable...... the past always sweet the future is sour but present is always amruth........ your poem is nice....

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rago rago 23 June 2009

let the farewell be memorable...... the past always sweet the future is sour but present is always amruth........ your poem is nice....

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Ginette Echavarria 23 June 2009

While I was reading this poem I remember my childhood. Yes, we have to leave the place were we grown up The place were we left the beautiful memories of our childhood. The friends and neighbors who were so kind to us, But leaving is not and end of everything It will always remain in our hearts those wonderful past we had.. The message was nice keep it up Kranthi..you have`a very nice poem..

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Ch J Satyananda Kumar 23 June 2009

Quite a good poem written in such a simple language with a good meaning. Yes, Kranthi, a time comes to bid farewell to our loved ones when a job comes, when it becomes necessary to shift to other place and when it becomes inevitable to leave this world for our heavenly abode. Congrats.

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