Saturday, November 21, 2009

Farewell Comments

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a distant demon fleeing leaving footprints in the sand
running from the scene with a dagger in his hand
i chase him down the spiralling stairs deeper into hell
he turns his head and smiles at me this place he knows to well
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Anthony Spiros Mcgilvra
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Robert Uy 27 November 2009

Some poems are just too sad...this one's got redemption in the end. Nice poem.

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Leah Ayliffe 21 November 2009

..wow...this was written perfectly. amazing imagry, extremely enjoyful to read!

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