Yesterday, we found comfort in eachother's hearts
And grace in eachother's arms as though for eternity
How so soon the clouds gather at winter
As distrust plants its seeds in the womb of our minds
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wow how nice! ! ! you use the metaphor well..and i liked your expressions and how there is a bridge which diffrenciate between you and the other...good poem keep writing..
love especially 'And bid you farewell from this shore forever. ': -)
very sad but beautiful poem. The imagery was wonderful as the words flowed gracefully. Well done.