Farewell Comments

but the boat of love will continue its journey until it reaches the shore of a new beginning…...... good begining with conceived thought.... i loved it full. good write and deserved full 10+++++ read mine: 'never say bye' and yes to to'

Let the boat of love reaches the shore against all troubles. A nice piece with a positive approach.

This is another beautiful piece of poetry. I enjoyed. Keep it up! ! ! Thanks sharing with us. Regards, Kolitha

A great poem in terms of art and thought. It takes me back to Yeats: 'And therefore I have sailed the seas and come To the holy city of Byzantium.'

Joan...This one is very good! I have sailed before, and your poem draws similarities between love and a journey very nicely. Well done! Hugs, Dee

Lovely sentiment. A voyage away from percieved love through tempest to end on the shore of true love.

Your poems are giving the nature of things over there with you.You really have nice piece of works.Keep on writing for the world to read your mind too.A great work.

A nice poem. Very powerful. Keep on writing.

A powerful poem with prophetic intonations. Nice word play as well.

A wonderful poem that ends on a rather hopeful note. Touching and inspiring.

A day is always in farewell That emerges from the rising In misty of its own spell And hours of true disguising To catch a boat that then sails You'll need to know of land Many are the shores and trails To come there to understand Each voyage takes you on a trip Of perceptive and discovering Don't let a chance from you slip For its aims are in the uncovering As every distance is an illusion For tidal waves to move and slope And give you some of its confusion So hold securely on to your rope Each day may be of rain or shine Or circumstances chimera done Just hold on to your kind of line And every battle may well be won There is a saying in new beginning That everything's standstill or old You only need your ways of winning And to that endeavor always hold

A new path way is found in the sea of love

but the boat of love will continue its journey until it reach the shore of new beginning..................... jurney when trudged upon love slithers across the blue passion raves up by the bliss life yet seems to be braced up azure...............love when wishful by the hope of tomorrow, belief happens to grow by the trust., wonderful imagery of love when glimmers by the dream drifting ashore, wellpenned,10+, thanks for sharing.

' Your love boat is sailing well'. Beautiful Poem Thanks for sharing. Ravi

'The boat of love ', 'isle of illusion', 'rain or shine', 'shore of new beginning…' are really nice! thoughtfull composition!