Friday, August 18, 2006

Farewell Comments

Rating: 5.0

My far away dumb lass
I hear your unsung sad song
from your talking eyes.
Your shattered lips
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nimal dunuhinga
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Duncan Wyllie 28 August 2006

Beautifully written by your fine hand, Love duncan X

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kskdnj sajn 19 August 2006

A touching poem Nimal, sad but thoughtful and enjoyed.Thanks. :)

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Sandra Fowler 19 August 2006

The sadness of this poem is incomparable. An eloquent cry straight from the soul. I can hear the lonely whistle of the train as it departs never to return again. Farewell is a beautiful word. It has a far more poignant sound than good-bye. This is one of your best, Nimal. Take care. Warmest regards, Sandra

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nimal dunuhinga

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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