Monday, June 27, 2016

Farewell...... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Love forever lost in the past,
knowing now never to last.
What was once in my heart,
as it was from the very start.
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Gordon Cross
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Raymond Letsitsa 14 July 2016

This is a craft so beautifully and majestically spoken on paper

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Chinedu Dike 29 June 2016

The lethal blend of heartbreak, distress, and disappointment which follow the exit of love, is well portrayed in the poem. A well articulated piece of poetry nicely penned from the heart with insight. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Gordon. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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The Random Poet 30 June 2016

My initial reaction was a light smile to which I can only counter with Meri beaucoup for sometimes the English language can fall short of what the heart feels - I'm not French, just a love lorn Cancerian ;)

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Fog Runner 28 June 2016

This is brutally real. I relate to the dreadful heaviness of it and thank you for penning.

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The Random Poet 30 June 2016

Once again I thank yourself & Chinedu for taking the time to post such praise, annoyingly a lot of the best songs & poems ever written have indeed come from the Authors troubled life..

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