Farewell Comments

Hi Patrick you seem mad at the poems people write. I look at it like a challenge. I read some strange poetry and its great'. There is meaning behind everything we read. Some of us want to be discreet so they write for themselves. I am open book and I get mad at myself. I'd rather be discreet. I don't know how. I have tried it. I am too emotional like you. So don't 'be mad move on or do like I do I try and figure out the meaning. Take care Excellent poem.

I enjoyed this you show a good understanding of what you've written good job i look forward to reading more Carly xox