Farewell Comments

An impressive poem on death. liked it.

Great work! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

It is great when we can write our own farewell and I am sure this helps family left behind. It is so important to not fear death. Just what happened in that dentist chair last week? Thank You Dear Valsa

Now farewell dear ones, farewell to all As I move into another state of bliss Thank you for your love and care Which I fear even there I would badly miss! ....very nicely composed in an emotional manner. Many thanks respected madam.

A very emotional write. Very truly, I don't know yet whether it will be joy or pain but definitely a transhipment.Wonderful detailing and thought provoking. You may read my early poem AFTER THE END

I too hope death confers upon us a complete state of bliss. I agree with Kavya when she says the poem is truly amazing. A wonderful composition.

A heart-wrenching poem. I felt very touched my the poem that you wrote so beautifully. A little while we are here and then in moment we are there, by wink of an eye. Very insightful reflection on purpose of life. Thank you.

When life as opening buds is sweet and with profound hopes carries us to where unknown yet land of eternal gain to the righteous and land of undying pain to the wicked we name it....Valsa.....death brings a man home, life a brief journey on earth away from home......a very touching poem penned wonderfully....as usual great write...10

wow amazing.....the soul that is getting departed must have had all the ups and downs in life, faced hardships along with love and care, has seen LIFE and lived LIFE and hence is now ready to move to another state of bliss! well written Mam

The poem demands a complete pin drop silence. It looks as if a noble soul, after completion of his divine mission, takes final leave of his followers. His parting message has an air of serenity and solace. The hand-picked words add to the impeccable beauty of the poem. I salute to you, Valsa ji.

My pain and penance are so complete When I heaved my final breath My soul has reached that exalted place When I swam across the river of death! ..... Yes, it is the eternal truth. A heart touching poem very nicely composed having deep imagination. Many thanks madam.

A final farewell that everyone waits for. The poem is weaved with carefully crafted words. Thank you.

What an amazing and moving poem. Loved it.

You have selected a very poignant theme; yet the reader feels peaceful at last. Good write. (10)

It's a touching poem, when I feel like this I write a funny poem like Dolphins, so like a good girl you also write a funny poem and enjoy it................10

The site is playing up and lets me access the New poem page only. Ah a wondrful poem that reads like an epitaph but i do hope u live hundreds of years more. It is adorable to read so i hope to write an epitaph like it someday.