Saturday, July 1, 2006

Farewell Comments

Rating: 4.5

Years ago we played together,
Two cousins with life and smiles.
Roller coasters, we were six,
And the world was ours to explore.
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Jonzo Bandwagoner
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Landrey 02 July 2006

that last stanza is[i'll be like sophia...] mucho bueno. snicker. snicker. No, but really it reminds me of my childhood. -landrey

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Sophia White 01 July 2006

Hey, Jonzo, that was great. Sad and wistful. Muy bien, mi amigo. Escribas mas poemas!

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Jonzo Bandwagoner

Jonzo Bandwagoner

Huntington, NY
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