Tuesday, February 5, 2008

Farewell Comments

Rating: 5.0

Whenever growing night,
Gloom coming down to my heart.
You aren't with me yet again.
I look to stars, to moon.
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Mehmet YILMAZLAR
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Unwritten Soul 07 November 2015

Very heartfelt poetry, maybe you should text or call the sun instead of waiting that shine ringing your phone...sometimes when sincere cling to your head, heart needs to do instead..just give it a try one more day_Soul

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Anjali Sinha 15 September 2008

a lovely poem so full of love and passion i have added to my fav list ++++++10 mehmet keep writing regards anjali

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Anjali Sinha 15 September 2008

a lovely poem so full of love and passion i have added to my fav list ++++++10 mehmet keep writing regards anjali

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Melvina Germain 06 February 2008

You paint a sad picture here Mehmet and certainly brought your reader into the poem as good poets do. I feel the intense heartfelt feelings portrayed here of this individual waiting patiently and anxiously for the one he loves to return. I thoroughly enjoyed the read. Melvina

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