Tuesday, July 20, 2010

“farewell” Comments

Rating: 4.1

Waving on my dreams,
Trusting my insight,
I fly with a belief,
My wings have got the might.
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Preetam Shetty
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Priyanka Shetty 28 November 2011

good one...... :) ...

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Bhavik Bamania 16 May 2011

superb and hats off this poem express my emotions regarding my school farewell..... :) please write some more....

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Shihabudheen K J 14 December 2010

Nice expressions picturised giving a lot of hope for we readers.we all love for your earnesty in poems .can you read my poems and comment.

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Dr Antony Theodore 26 July 2010

Waving dreams, Trusting insight, you fly in faitjh on wings eith might. very nice expressions dear preetam u convey a lot of courage and hope thank you

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Dr Antony Theodore 26 July 2010

Waving on dreams, flying with faith on ur mighty wings destined for new arenas..feeling the aroma of cheer........ very fine dear preetam. really nice. thank you for sharing. gave u a 10

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Carla Jean Valerta 23 July 2010

you're good, , , i like the way you write meaning full<<<

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Anita Trivedi 23 July 2010

I liked the way you presented the picture of farewell. I'm speechless. It's beautifull.........

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Kudakwashe Roak Mutama 23 July 2010

Brilliant piece! ! ! ! ! the way you have been playing around with words come with years of writing and this poem is a reflection of that...... You kept the reader captivated and longing for more and i just thought that were going to continue.....we want more, more, more and more....... Listen to this 'Today I run with pace, I feel the aroma of cheer, But the dripping water confuses, Is it sweat or is it a tear.' what more can a reader want when you can capture their imagination like this? ? ? ? write more! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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How beautifully you have expressed the pain of Farewell...! ! ! Its the toughest thing to do...Brilliant my friend...(finally poemhunter is allowing me to comment)

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A meaningful poem. Creative writing at its best. Well done.; D

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Dwi Utami 21 July 2010

Hey i'dont question on your poem, you god writer and your poem, trust on trust so what the problem, JUST GUD LUCK IN NEXTIME CREAT GUD AND GUD AGAIN.CONGRATS.

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Marina Gasbey 20 July 2010

I read this poem 3 times, and it really moved me... The sorrow of leaving all your loved ones behind, and the excitement of your new adventures! So very deep and meaningful. You are a great Poet Preetam Shetty. I can really relate to this poem, and I believe others will to. Thankyou, Marina...

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