Cold soul sizzles around the body
Half cooked at first attempt
The push is harder
On the final breath
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So, Mister, unless another site is paying you to post your brilliant insightful trips into the human spirit and world, how could you forsake and break the loving hearts and hungry minds of all your devoted and faithful fans? Has to be that the new site will guarantee that only readers with intelligent quotients of at least 200 will be eligible, yes? Your popularity here isn't sufficient to maintain your creative impulses and genius? Just joking. We all know life isn't fair, but there are enough of us who'll be moaning and groaning, sending subliminal messages your way to keep you awake at night...if you find your Muse has abandoned you, you'll know it's us interrupting the flow, yes? With love and best wishes, I want only the best for you. Carol
Beautiful not to long or to short i love it im gonna vote it.....9 cos i dont know someparts
In the blink of eyes, the soul gets separated from the body.Pang of separation will be beyond description and the near and dear ones left behind, will cherish the poems till their last days.Wonderful expression and wording.Very deep message has been beautifully conveyed in limited words.
Farewell My dear poet friend.. a perfect farewell poem.. nice write :)
poems are only the rememeberece for poet..neautiful write....10
Very beautifully written poem. Well penned..............10
very nice you have showed the farewell in very creative way with meaningful and i wish that we wont feel it cause it is hard my best wishes laila
'In a blink of eyes The host is separate' the last few lines are the BEST; you just keep proving that you are a real poet. What a way to say good bye. Simplicity is your way to perfection. Well done
It makes me with glooms but i hope you will be back as a becontree.....in this forum.....a lot of people leave, as clould leave the sky, but when the sun leaves thge sky, it makes a huge difference
The host is separated Songs of sorrow Fill the room If you miss me Flip the pages My poems are in store.ya it is painful always..reminds of our long association with colleagues...10 read mine...bidding farewell....anywhere... i miss