Friday, July 24, 2009

Faretheewell Comments

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Forsooth sweet maid, tempt me not, my plea,
with winsome smile and sparkling een,
that draws me to thy fulsome breast.
Twixt Heaven and Hell to place one kiss,
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Irene C S ClarkHogg
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Ben Gieske 27 July 2009

I think you have captured in a masterful way not only the culture of a previous age but also the male's interests and priorities prevalent at the time. If the fair maiden were in tune with the times, she, no doubt, would end up swooning at such attention and proposal.

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C. P. Sharma 25 July 2009

It reminds me of the opening verse of the Paradise Lost, of the original sin that brought death into this world and all our woes. But the temptation is irresistable. CP

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Christopher Talon 24 July 2009

I hope they get married and live forever in love. Well, I really love this one too. Fearing her father he does not give in to his desire, but he promises to return with a ring. That is wonderful.

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