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my memory's screen door opens to the stars;
there's my Grandfather in the yard
gazing up at the constellations
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This amazing Member Poem Of The Day revisited and reread, makes the poem lovelier than ever before! And More
" there's my Grandfather in the yard gazing up at the constellations 'That's Telstar, going over us still, ' he whispers softly" I enjoy magic moments captured like honeybees in a jar. QtR
but I'm too old for that now or else he's too young. younger than I am now but still in the pea green jacket with the fedora trousers from the 1940s./// every memory is every green, too young; memory never get growing old, it's always liveliness as like the dream; here the poet excellently delineated the memory of her grandfather; beautiful poem penned; I enjoyed; congrats for being selected this poem as POD.........5***** from me
I really like this. My grandfather meant a lot to me, as yours obviously did to you. Congrats on the selection as member poem of the day!
Fantastic nostalgic poem with wonderful memories! Congratulations on the selection of this as poem of the day!
A most beautiful dedication for your Grandfather, dear poetess Mary Angela! How you have created this ardent poem so vividly starting in the garden where Grandfather sits to gazing up at the constellations. This starting in the garden with Grandfather is so impressive and nostalgia and above all very cozy. You succeeded in the poem to make it so close to our thoughts, as if Grandfather still IS there in the garden.So intimate.
A wonderful tribute, Mary Angela! A well-deserved choice as Member Poem of the day!
Lined! ! ! ! With the muse of the moonlight! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
So nicely executed. It is a great tribute to your grandfather. Thanks and congratulations for being chosen this poem as the member poem of the poem of the day.
A beautiful, moving tribute to the poet's grandfather, with many lovely lyrical lines.... well-chosen poem of the day...
Mary, " Empyrean Elegance" - A wonderful poem! to My Poem List - 5 stars! !
you are my best