I am safe in the mystic riddles and natural pleasures,
The sky is lit with Aladdinβs lamps and universal treasures,
While stars are twinkling and junketing in a New York minute!
Whishing and whooshing! Whistling and whisking in the heaven set!
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I am safe in the mystic riddles and natural pleasures....../// awesome written; I'm pleased here in this line; it's introspective observation on self; well penned
A lovely poem that captures the many wonders of nature. Great imagery and nice rhyme.
Thank you honour poet Rose Marie for your marvellous review πππ
Beautiful sir. Sky is lit with Alladin's lamps...liked it sir. thanks for sharing. I would like to read my poem Femininity Unbound. thank you sir.
A really fantastic poem, really enjoyed reading it. A fantastic write.
good poem :) , nice philosophical meaning, good style of writing and melody of the poem. It sounds like a little heart song)
It's often quite pleasant to escape the maddness of the mob, to find an helusion of sorts, where alone we may sit, and think for infinite amounts of time, this poem is beautiful! : D
This is different...first I spoke to myself - a monologue. Then a giant star joined me - a dialogue. Sometimes we want to escape this rat-race. The stars are beckoning us with promises. Like you said, Aladdin's lamps. Very great poem!
You are a real ''''rhymer'''.. I like the internal rhyme of the line (((Wishing and whooshing! Whistling and whisking in the heaven set!))) .. An amazing poem again...10+++
While stars are twinkling and junketing in a New York minute! Whishing and whooshing! Whistling and whisking in the heaven set! Walking in the Vale - proud, Faraway from madding crowd! A nice rhythm is there in the poem. Walking in the vale far away from maddening crowd shows that there a special feeling in the heart to enjoy the tranquility in the company of the nature. I compact and well composed poem I must say. I'm grateful to poet for sharing the poem this quality. It happens once in blue moon. Keep it up!
'Off the beaten track, at the heavenβs lake is highlighting' RAB
'Off the beaten track, at the heavenβs lake is highlighting' RAB
Wow! Such a splendid write with fabulous imagery! I find fathomless poetic beauty in this little brilliant composition of yours....ccaptivating poetic expression! A creditable piece of poetry! Top score