Monday, July 17, 2006

Far Too Deep Comments

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Always thought I was lucky
Havin' you holding on, when your blue
But now that things are yucky
Not so sure that was always true
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James S.
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Kee Thampi 17 July 2006

Summer days wished last forever Break of dawn, until we sleep Why this feeling must we sever? When did things become so steep? my words on this poem is -very poetic- open the window of mind into words of a poem

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i love it...i kno wat it feels like! tori

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