Sunday, May 10, 2009

Far Somewhere - Stayed Comments

Rating: 5.0

the skeleton in shorts urgently is grilling
the biting insect without anaesthetizing
sharply is quilting straight and into the vein
(will still import the 'army of the salvation')
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Maria Barbara Korynt
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Ahmad Shiddiqi 21 May 2009

enchantingly different! keep writing!

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 14 May 2009

A graphical description..........like a prose poem...................A good write.............

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Dagmara Anna 13 May 2009

Very good poem with elements of the humour and the irony.It is worthwhile reading. I like it very much :) DA

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