Saturday, December 21, 2013

Far Side Of The Moon Comments

Rating: 5.0

the ocean's water
rose higher
the invisible hands of the moon
drew it with a force mysterious
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Matt Mooney 08 January 2014

A masterful poem on the forces within the universe in which we live.10.

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Rubab Atwal 25 December 2013

a beautiful poem..............

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 24 December 2013

grand imagery to depict creation!

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Valsa George 23 December 2013

Yes, it seems the moon is created to keep an eye on Earth! ! A journey into the time of creation! ! Enjoyed! !

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Sekharan Pookkat 23 December 2013

Remember spring tide and neap tide Raise and fall of one side and the other side Like our desires which have rise and fall seeing and wondering nature forces

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Ruby Mostazir 22 December 2013

Amazing imagination..... :) :)

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 22 December 2013

Good imagination and I loved reading this poem..

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Geetha Jayakumar 22 December 2013

Wow....Wonderful poem Kanav. Beautiful journey to planets. Loved reading it.

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Neela Nath Das 22 December 2013

So soothing and of course it takes us to a pleasant journey! Thumbs up, Kanav!

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