Far Off Neighbor Comments

Ah i wish India and Pakistan never be that far....by hands and hearts...different faiths and race not a barrier to be one. Maybe the history a bit hurt from past but for future is the time we will live, so do it better for both and for all countries..we are one, you maybe different as they too but nothing is same, that is how unique for each person, race and nation is...but truly we are in one nation of earth but in different big district call countries...no barriers just love_Soul

heart touching sir..... well written, keep us motivated with many more wonderful pieces.....

if everyone could think like you, , , ,

really the partition of india was the greatest abrasion that india faced...............very truthful and powerful write :)

wonderful thought.i wish every individual thought this way.

Neighbours are meant to help each other, provide support in distress..I wish the two great nations understand the same. We all are human beings made of the same red blood and having a heart inside. Hats off to you sir!

wonderful write with wonderful comments advocating the need for wonderful relations b/w the 2 countries.

lovely lines.....mirroring the common destiny of nation neighbors. yes...wdnt it...cdnt it....be so much better for the helpless trodden morass of humanity heaped high liked.... sat

Teaching in poetry is more freedom than an advice shape..thus i think this is the best method...and you are using it for love to teach love for all by a pen_Soul

Dearest neighbour, I wish that our entire country listen to this....... And teach their children that they deserve to be friends Teach them love...... When I meet people like us often I wonder why are there even problems between us? ? ? You aint against me neither am I against you.... You seek peace I do too..... Why are we then like we are? ? ? Anyways...... Your this piece was magical... Loved it. Plus the message you wrote for your daughter...... Heart-touching! ! ! I loved this..... Going through this.... I must confess, you've inspired me to write something like this too.... I sure will represent this side...... We seek peace.... Never dropp writing..... You rock! ! ! :)

very true indeed, it is actually an evolution, that none would have predicted, wonderful write, very well structured The_African_Son