Thursday, July 23, 2009

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Rating: 3.4

...surprisingly
it was sunny when
he said goodbye,
I expected rain.
...
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Alice Cuenca
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Jeff Pua 05 April 2010

I love this.. this is a brilliant piece.. I was so lucky to have read it..10/10

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Sarwar Chowdhury 02 August 2009

Its thoughtful and beautiful! 10+

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Sameer Ahmed 02 August 2009

Healing comes from courage and we all have that in ourselves. We only need to dig in ourselves a little more to explore it. Sometimes we hurt. Sometimes our hearts ache. Sometimes we cry out in pain. It is a cycle that will keep on curling as time flows and this continum of life lives on forever. This poem is worth admirable and I believe that it surely is my greatest hope that these words will touch your and reader's heart and stir the sage within.....10/10

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Sonya Florentino 23 July 2009

so far, yet so real....do wounds really heal, or do they simply remain dormant...

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Ric Bastasa 23 July 2009

wowowowowow! i like this much. congratulations...100!

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