Thursday, November 29, 2012

Far From Reality Comments

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I think that night just got me,
Miles aways from strength,
And was only gulping for a breath,
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Cornell Sandifer 29 November 2012

your all over the place your reader cant keep up. its much to long and you want to paint a picture of what your trying to tell the reader

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