Sunday, November 1, 2009

'Far From My Heart' Comments

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Touch me...one more time
Tonight, don't leave me alone.
'Cause for your kiss
Is all that I long.
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Lindemberg Pereira da Silva
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Emma Kessler 14 December 2009

I love the main line, 'your heart is far from me'. It's a wonderful way to phrase the idea of the poem. It's beautiful.

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Danny H 04 November 2009

Emotions were very well displayed about this poem. It was extremely good each poem is getting deeper and deeper

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