Thursday, August 9, 2018

Far From Me, Near Me Comments

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Far from the reach of my protective wing,
you fly on your own, battered and afraid,
while I sit here upon a tree and sing
of your return to the safe nest we made.
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Lina Katsorchi
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Jazib Kamalvi 13 March 2019

A good start with a nice poem, Lina. Read my poem Love and L u s t. Thanks.

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Dev Anand 18 August 2018

ill you sail back to the warmth of my heart. Far from my touch, far from my sight, but in my thoughts forever; next to me in imaginings way stronger than reality, i am waiting, come back to me and we shall fall in love again. lovely moments. endless embrace.... lovely emotional romantic poem. dev

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Kostas Lagos 10 August 2018

Great poem with a romantic touch. Love it

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Savita Tyagi 09 August 2018

Lovely poem. At some point the nest becomes empty but we are joined by love in heart. Loved the last lines. Your poem reminded me of a poem of mine ‘ An Amazing Flight’ though it explored a different emotion but sprouted from the same root cause. Empty nest! Thanks for sharing.

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Lina Katsorchi

Lina Katsorchi

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