Far Centaurus Comments

Nicely written) Especially I love the first line! 'We bent time into space' And don't like the idea if dying planet ( Well, who would like the Earth to die? Centaurus?) Next time you could write about far Swan. It certainly has Kepler, a brother of our Earth)

When I read this poem, I think of the speaker's desire to escape from the mundane, the boring, from the mass of humans trapped on a dying planet. The poet makes this happen in the most delectable way- - the BRANWREN that can catapult its passengers toward Centaurus. Forget Port Trakl, there's a new planet in town for those ready to be the Angels of a New Creation.- -only 11 million light years away. What is the meaning of Branwren. I'm ready for chapter 2....

Very amazing poem shared on adventure and about future journey. This is entirely like new creation of angels. Wise drafting shared on.10

A very entertaining and thought provoking poem