Monday, October 19, 2009

*far Away On Ocean Dreams... Comments

Rating: 3.6

Far away on the ocean dreams,
I sailed on my memories' boat
camouflaged by the misty past
and came out with a anecdote.
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Vaibhav Pandey
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fleur de lys 31 October 2009

Words flow like honey, dream-like imagery. Always a pleasure to read your fine verse Vaibhav.

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Rachel Butler 27 October 2009

With a song or two to face the stroke I sang my way out of the constant strife... Rachel Ann Butler

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There's nothing like the beauty of music to sail away from the problems of life. Beautiful flow and poem. 10 love Karin

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 22 October 2009

a lovely poem with interesting imagery.

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precise.. wonderfully so. sing the worries way.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 20 October 2009

a lovely short poem with beautiful imagery.....10

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Catrina Heart 20 October 2009

Great positive outlook in life singing your way out of strife.........Great 10++++++

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 20 October 2009

wonderful.... small and b'ful. loved the first stanza. a simple, flowing poem. great. thank you.

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Shashendra Amalshan 20 October 2009

Yes my friend. It is good to sing your way out of strife.. This is a very fine poem.. This poem shows your maturity as a writer. Nice innovative expressions..10 regards Shan

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Sathyanarayana M V S 20 October 2009

Small and beautifl. Great imagery....

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Sandra Fowler 20 October 2009

A beautiful title for a beautiful poem. May you always sing your way out of strife, my brave friend. Kind wishes, Sandra

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Kesav Easwaran 19 October 2009

singing one's way out of the strifes in sailing life...nice theme Vaibhav...well presented...10

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Carl Harris 19 October 2009

Though only two four line verses, Vaibhav, this is a fine poem, a complete poem, carrying your idea to completion in eight well expressed and imagery filled lines. It was a pleasant read from beginning to end and it made a statement. Carl.

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Sandra Martyres 19 October 2009

A very neat little poem with strong imagery...good write Vaibhav

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