Far away on the ocean dreams,
I sailed on my memories' boat
camouflaged by the misty past
and came out with a anecdote.
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With a song or two to face the stroke I sang my way out of the constant strife... Rachel Ann Butler
There's nothing like the beauty of music to sail away from the problems of life. Beautiful flow and poem. 10 love Karin
precise.. wonderfully so. sing the worries way.
a lovely short poem with beautiful imagery.....10
Great positive outlook in life singing your way out of strife.........Great 10++++++
wonderful.... small and b'ful. loved the first stanza. a simple, flowing poem. great. thank you.
Yes my friend. It is good to sing your way out of strife.. This is a very fine poem.. This poem shows your maturity as a writer. Nice innovative expressions..10 regards Shan
A beautiful title for a beautiful poem. May you always sing your way out of strife, my brave friend. Kind wishes, Sandra
singing one's way out of the strifes in sailing life...nice theme Vaibhav...well presented...10
Though only two four line verses, Vaibhav, this is a fine poem, a complete poem, carrying your idea to completion in eight well expressed and imagery filled lines. It was a pleasant read from beginning to end and it made a statement. Carl.
A very neat little poem with strong imagery...good write Vaibhav
Words flow like honey, dream-like imagery. Always a pleasure to read your fine verse Vaibhav.