Monday, April 13, 2009

Far Away Lands Comments

Rating: 5.0

Enlightened breezes cast hope
on far away lands,
spices and gin flavour the words
of the lithe.
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Melissa L. Pelletier
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 04 January 2018

A profound poem. loved it.

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tom mc quade 11 December 2009

i find myself traveling in this poem as a happy stowaway in a voyage of words..i agree with patricia, this poem is a keeper!

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Patti Masterman 12 September 2009

Loved every line in this. It has such a rich feel to it, as though everything were part of every other thing..saved this for my favorites..thank you (smiles) Patti

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Louis Rams 20 April 2009

the spices of granada is plain to see for you have taken away the mystery.

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