This is the sanctuary
where the prettified young lady,
calm, and always ready,
fans her breasts, aglow,
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From tip to toe, most thoroughly, her delicate surfaces appear, oiled with sweet perfumery. - the flowers nearby swoon gracefully. A poem so well crafted with excellent imagery.
Far away from here must be a place of gift of God where breeze and water mingled to soothe the spoiled child's fear.......great imagery crafted beautifully......thanks for sharing
The tone is intriguing moving from glee to melancholy yet soothing.
Let's see if PH has fixed the problem. This poem is very lush.