Far Away And Elsewhere.-A Poem For A Child. Comments

hi, a very nice narrative poem i must say, tuly enjoyed this jungle story.nice to know you are in pakistan.take care

This was an interesting but enjoyable writing. I do recommend it. For both children and adults. It does not meet my rather strict standards for rhymed poetry, however, entertainment is the real value and communication is the objective of any writing. This piece has both of those. GW62

And for a grown-up too please? This is such a colourful jungle story with a veritable feast of lush images, vibrant noises and a fine melodic flow. I could imagine this poem illustrated by Maurice Sendak (where the wild things are) . It is such a wild and woolly poem. love, Allie xxxx

A beautiful picture unrolled, thanks and 10

Truly well written. Greatly enjoyed the read. So much imagery.