Friday, October 9, 2009

Far Away Comments

Rating: 3.5

The sun is cold and pale and sick
The sky is silent with dark emotion
Time has become an entity of almost non exist
Torturing this feeling of forlorn and unfulfilled devotion
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R. Ariffin
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Chris G. Vaillancourt 14 October 2009

A compelling and enjoyable read.

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Patti Masterman 09 October 2009

This is so exquisite. I can't believe how people can write like this; and yet it happens occasionally..thanks.

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R. Ariffin

R. Ariffin

Johor, Peninsular Malaysia
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