far and so alone…
you stood by the fire…
waiting for the one..
far and so sadly
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touchy! 10+++++++ sometime the real realization comes when time.......
Metaphorically and musically rich. The melancholic tone is dominant but musically inviting. Great!
Love is a funny game, Anna...you would get beaten there square often you unaware... pretty good write on sad lines...brings in the entire pain that lost love creates inside mind...thanks...10
well done anna, this is a fine poem. i like the refrain part of it. keep writing anna.
hi anna very nice touchy lines liked it its a beauty....be proud of it cheers
u are truelly a great poet and i wish i reac ur talent someday