Friday, November 8, 2019

Far And Near Comments

Rating: 3.5

Wonders of the world abound
on our earthly stomping ground,
in the seven seas profound,
midst the heavens round us wound.
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Harley White
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Spock The Vegan 09 November 2019

Your poems of the universe are always amazing. This one is superb with every line rhyming in each stanza.

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Harley White 10 November 2019

Thank you! I really appreciate the compliment!

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Bill Cantrell 08 November 2019

Your third stanza is the heart of this poem...stories of great immense, begging questions why and whence...this is why I find your poetry so interesting...you present each poem with the fascination of childhood wonder, the subject matter is always adorned by you with impeccable descriptions always leading us to questions...will our search of cosmic sphere.. teach us to esteem what’s here? You have your own unique place in poetry my friend and I am so very fortunate to have found it!

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Harley White 09 November 2019

As always, I’m pleased that you read the poem and took the trouble to comment. It’s interesting to me that different readers pinpoint different stanzas, which sometimes I cannot predict. The way you respond to my poems is wonderful and a great source of ongoing encouragement! Thank you so much!

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