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Your metaphors are so vivid that I appreciate this one! ! ! Great job!

Line by lines you made the distance become a shorter..the flowers along the gap make the distance vocally sounded far but feel close spiritually...keep it up and write new poem..it already a year without new poem my fella_Unwritten Soul

Dear friend, its difficult to comprehend the depth of your feelings.........if only you could explain a little.......is it blossom or bossom? and the lines if the hair is a bridge between us, ..............would you be kind enough to add some explanation, , , , , , , , , ,