Wednesday, August 14, 2013

Fantom Lover Comments

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The raven locks, trailing on silk,
Long lashes adorning his closed eyes,
His beautiful full lips sigh,
Part in love, part in sleep,
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Lucifera Santez
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Heather Wilkins 20 August 2013

In the darkess recess of my mind he wakes up lovely write

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Heather Wilkins 20 August 2013

a beautiful poem written with great imagery. a delight to read

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Aswath Raman 18 August 2013

I defenitely love the imagery you have used Ma'am! This is amazing. You have drawn a good picture!

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Unwritten Soul 18 August 2013

How dark it started turn into golden bright at the end, crafting art with love and this is what you have done..lovely_Soul

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Enoch Desewu 16 August 2013

Great piece u have here. All the best

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Dennis Field 16 August 2013

Very nice to have dreams, love the poem has lots of feelings for me.

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Hazel Durham 15 August 2013

Stunning write with such deep ermotions laid bare with his extreme pain of losing. You paint a breathtaking picture in words! !

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 14 August 2013

You are a master crafter dear Lucifera, wow! ..this is a masterpiece.. Salute to you. Siya_! !

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 14 August 2013

nice poem, i love the imagery great work

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