The raven locks, trailing on silk,
Long lashes adorning his closed eyes,
His beautiful full lips sigh,
Part in love, part in sleep,
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a beautiful poem written with great imagery. a delight to read
I defenitely love the imagery you have used Ma'am! This is amazing. You have drawn a good picture!
How dark it started turn into golden bright at the end, crafting art with love and this is what you have done..lovely_Soul
Very nice to have dreams, love the poem has lots of feelings for me.
Stunning write with such deep ermotions laid bare with his extreme pain of losing. You paint a breathtaking picture in words! !
You are a master crafter dear Lucifera, wow! ..this is a masterpiece.. Salute to you. Siya_! !
In the darkess recess of my mind he wakes up lovely write