Saturday, August 29, 2009

Fantasy World Comments

Rating: 5.0

living in this fantasy world
where whatever you thought of
'you could do.'
and all your dreams would follow you.'
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louis rams
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~ Jon London ~ 30 August 2009

No one could have written it better by friend....LIFE! ! ..........so many truths stem from this one word...........great penning louis

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dr veenaa rai 30 August 2009

love is life...true indeed! wonderful poem.

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this si a fantactic world.. my Love......... is Christ.........................he completes my world, such that.. i do not fight for these fantasies. i relax and let his will be granted in me.. so much do that im worry free

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Kranthi Pothineni 29 August 2009

The initial tour of your fantasy world made me to wonder what this poem will be. Friend you had themed a very important message in a beautiful and creative way.Its a charming write.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 29 August 2009

a priceless thing love. .you have it within you you search for it in the ricches all around you A WONDERFUL TRIBUTE TO LOVE ITSELF...10

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Deborah Cromer 29 August 2009

Ah! The love of my life, my perfect treasure. The love is sacred and precious, truly priceless. Nothing valuable and expensive could ever match the true love feeling. I am loved and I am Queen. I have his touch and this is my kingdom. Our hearts together and we become the richest souls in the world. I love your poem. You know what you are writing about. Great work. You write of one of the greatest treasures there is. Good job. Excellent. DC

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