Friday, December 18, 2009

Fantasy Comments

Rating: 5.0

You gonna stop staring or not? some thing's gonna be starting or not?
You stood so close, my eyes did close, i stopped breathing as your warm breath melted me,
the look in your eyes rested me,
you stand so tall and your long hands....i wanna wrap them around me,
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rinki nandy
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Joseph Poewhit 26 June 2010

Fast moving words and ideas

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Allemagne Roßmann 27 January 2010

Feels like vampire's fantasy.Ecstatic write and fetish displays.10

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Bethany Williams 16 January 2010

wow. Thats the best poem I ever read.

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Marieta Maglas 28 December 2009

another world you are taking me.....my heart surrendering me...love smothering me. nice lyric poem 10

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AtreyaSarma Uppaluri 24 December 2009

Tantalising love-making. I enjoyed every bit of it. Breathless. Beautiful…just how it should be.

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