Monday, November 7, 2005

Fantasy Comments

Rating: 4.0

Every time you glance my way
My heart is moved to tears;
Praying that you'll embrace a love
That conquers all of my fears.
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Vanessa Brown
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Lawrence S. Pertillar 07 November 2005

WHEW! Wow..Ms Brown, I think I'm needing a few ice cubes here! I just read your 'Beautiful World' and that is as fantastic as 'Fantasy'. You are, indeed, one terrific writer! Congratulations and thanks for sharing your wonderful talent.

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Karina . 07 November 2005

Wow..i really love this poem, Soo romantic, sensual and sweet! Great Job: -K

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