Wednesday, March 29, 2006

Fantasy Comments

Rating: 4.5

Don't talk to me, you aren't my type
Prince of teenage society
I never understood all the hype
Of the gang of fake friends called popularity
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Eden Sheffroth
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Veronika Knollman 12 April 2006

Good poem.

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Padraic O' Reilly 29 March 2006

This is a great poem Eden. I love the shift from disinterest, and really kind of disgust, to just pure admiration. A really great and original piece. Keep it up. Patrick O'Reilly

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Eden Sheffroth

Eden Sheffroth

Brantford, Ontario
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