Saturday, February 14, 2009

Fantastic Fantasies Of The Lover Comments

Rating: 5.0

She spread her arms
and he took her in
holding her lightly
he travelled swiftly
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sreelekha premjit
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 27 February 2009

Stellar imagework, and impassioned verve highlight this very criep, and tightly structured work...Solid craftsmanship... F j R 2009

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Ency Bearis 20 February 2009

a lovely write..with full of emotion..nice 10

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Kesav Easwaran 14 February 2009

good valentine day piece...sweetand soft...and superb ending lines...nice to read...10

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Fiona Davidson 14 February 2009

Beautiful valentines day write Sreelekha...thank you...10++

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Fiona Davidson 14 February 2009

Beautiful valentines day write Sreelekha...thank you...10++

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