Saturday, March 18, 2017

Fantasies. Comments

Rating: 4.3

If I were a dandelion would you be a bee?
Would you be drawn to my screaming yellow?
Would my nectar be worth the flight?
If I were an albatross would you be the wind
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Jeresi Katusime
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Life 22 September 2022

This deserves to go viral

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Jazib Kamalvi 15 June 2017

A lovely questionaire indeed. Thanks

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Dr Antony Theodore 06 June 2017

this is a wonderful poem..... what a fine imagination.. dandaleon and the butterfly., albatross would you be the wind, loves' riddles, dandaleon and the bee again at the end.......... soooo beautiful imagaintion.. thank you dear poetess. a definite 10.

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Saadat Tahir 21 March 2017

nice charming lines peppered with philosophical questions liked

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Jeresi Katusime 26 March 2017

Thank you for reading me...

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Brian Mawadri 20 March 2017

lovely..................

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Jeresi Katusime 21 March 2017

thanks alot

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Gajanan Mishra 18 March 2017

stand as I am, good one

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Jeresi Katusime 21 March 2017

Thank you.

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