Thursday, February 7, 2013

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In starless night to-
think of you, watching the
moon dying away.
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Satish Verma
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Babatunde Aremu 07 February 2013

Nice poem! The use of imageries in this poem keeps the reader thinking deep. Pls read my poems and comment

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Hardik Vaidya 07 February 2013

Satish libidinous encounter with a spark, what a creation. I envy your life. I don't wish to live it. I don't wish to feel it. But I want a part of it. I want to smell its aroma in the bosom of my fantasy, brilliant poem.

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