Monday, June 24, 2013

Fancy To The Moon Comments

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O, yonder silvery ball where you go
Hark! Let me take a gold string
To tie you on to make a balloon of you
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Yasmin Khan
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Bri Edwards 03 July 2013

i've added this to my poemlist. CARPEL.... a new word for me. meaning a plant part? as for the following line.................To put in my neck a pedant newly found............i would write at or on my neck, and i believe you want PENDANT, as it fits and pedant does not. i had to check definition of pedant also. there are too many words for one to know! ! ! ! ! and so many are so similar! thanks for sharing. and thanks for some rhyming.

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Wahab Abdul 26 June 2013

wonderful! loved it...

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 25 June 2013

These are beautiful words. Are you a moon child? Were you born in the astrological chart Cancer? I am one and know how I love the moon too. I even made a picture of the Mars one year when it was near to the earth. Funny, it is not special, just a ball of light in the night sky.

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Valerie Dohren 24 June 2013

A lovely poem about the moon, and yes there is a child in all of us - thank goodness!

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